It's a holiday Tuesday for me, but I dedicate today's tantalizing teaser to those grafting their way through the working week, sustained by dreams of a far-off land called Friday. May you all make it there unscathed and find a beautiful reward on arriving. And why not indulge yourself, two days into the week, by reading my fellow-writers' 200-word teasers also? With an open mind and your beverage of choice. Here's the link:
http://tantalizingtuesday.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/19-february.html?zx=f244adc73d09b75
Here's mine:
http://tantalizingtuesday.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/19-february.html?zx=f244adc73d09b75
Here's mine:
Employees of
the Month
“Wh-who are
these guys again?” Aimee could scarcely manage the phrase.
“Boss-lady
arranged it.” Emma’s cunt was under similar duress to that of her blonde
colleague. The great wedge of cock sawing in and out of her was massively
distracting as she fought for words. “She—oh god—She thought we’d given up so
much time of the Hewlett contract we needed—shit!—an end-of-week reward.”
“Ffffuck,
she’s a good boss.” Aimee’s ‘reward’ was gripping her waist and powering into her
like a machine. “Is yours… as bloody big as this bastard?”
“God yes.
He’s stretching me out and… oh fuck, that’s deep!” Emma thought she might burst
out of her satin blouse, so hard were her nipples. “Company’s called—Aaagh!
Fuck!—Rent-a-stud.” Or Cunt-wreckage.
Maybe Cock Assassins. Her own rented stud muttered something in—what—German?
Dutch? Most likely it translated as “Keep that pants-hole stretched, bitch”.
“Fuckers
ruined our trouser suits,” Aimee observed, weak from her incessant shafting.
“Company’ll
cover it,” Emma panted. “Anyway, isn’t this worth it?”
“Christ yes…”
They both leaned one-handed on Miranda’s desk and stared back at the reckless
pistoning of cocks into their wet cunts. “Oh god, Emma—thank sweet fuck it’s
Friday!”

Well! I'm speechless Jake. Your teaser is a gripping one to say the least. Can't help but love it
ReplyDeleteErm, yes, erm :-O *picks jaw off floor*
ReplyDeleteLol. That sure never happened in the offices I worked in ;-)
Hard to get so hard on just 200 words Jake but you did it for me.
ReplyDeleteHot Jake, nothing like company benefits is there? lol!
ReplyDeleteThat was one hot tease. Loved the flow of the dialogue and how it all combined to bring the picture even more to life. Forget the hot coffee, I need a cool glass of water :)
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ReplyDeleteThese ladies will never for get their Fridays and will continue to work "hard" for their boss. I'd like to have a boss like theirs.
ReplyDeleteDamn that's more than a tease...lol. Hot and very erotic. Wish my Friday's had this kind of reward.
ReplyDeleteDakota
Loved the video!! I agree with the comments here! what a reward!!!
ReplyDeleteJake, now that's what I call TGIF! Nice and DAMN hot tease there dude!
ReplyDeleteExcellent! I want a reward like that! ;P
ReplyDeleteThe problem with these snapshots? I want them all to be stories in their own right. And a mention of Miranda! I have to admit I'm waiting for her next appearance more than Gavin's.
ReplyDeletewow, i'm going to have to join Doris is taking my jaw off of the floor.
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